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cindyandkevin
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I would take out the 'with us' and add 'we' to the beginning:
Together with our parents we invite you to share this joyous celebration of love at our marriage............
Hope that's what you were looking for!!!
Pmpkn087
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It is our moment to celebrate the love that unites us
Jennifer Marie Quinn and Pasquale Albert Catalano
Together with our parents invite you to share with us this joyous celebration of love at our marriage on Friday, the twenty fifth of November Two thousand and five at Four o’clock in the afternoon Trinity Lutheran Church 63-70 Dry Harbor Road Middle Village, NY 11379
Reception to follow at Seven Thirty in the evening Crest Hollow Country Club 8325 Jericho Turnpike Woodbury, New York 11797 -----------------------------------------------------
I think theres something with the 'Ours' and the 'us's thats nagging at my brain!!!!!
How can I change it but keep the same sentiment????
HEY, not only are we getting married on the same day, but I am getting married at Trinity St. Andrew's in Maspeth.
JPC1125
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should it become then?
We invite you to share (( in )) this joyous celebration of love
Alll my years wasted on my english degree
JPC1125
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Posted by JPC1125
It is our moment to celebrate the love that unites us
Jennifer Marie Quinn and Pasquale Albert Catalano
Together with our parents invite you to share with us this joyous celebration of love at our marriage on Friday, the twenty fifth of November Two thousand and five at Four o’clock in the afternoon Trinity Lutheran Church 63-70 Dry Harbor Road Middle Village, NY 11379
Reception to follow at Seven Thirty in the evening Crest Hollow Country Club 8325 Jericho Turnpike Woodbury, New York 11797 -----------------------------------------------------
I think theres something with the 'Ours' and the 'us's thats nagging at my brain!!!!!
How can I change it but keep the same sentiment????
HEY, not only are we getting married on the same day, but I am getting married at Trinity St. Andrew's in Maspeth.
I know EXACTLY where that is...Im always driving in from brooklyn by the train tracks and I pass by Trinity on my way to Metro all the time!!!! Congrats!
ETA---- SAME DAY TOO!!!! I am a Date TRIPLET!!!!!
SomethingBlu
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I like it this way much better...
It is our moment to celebrate the love that unites us
Together with our parents
Jennifer Marie Quinn and Pasquale Albert Catalano
invite you to share with us the joyous celebration of love at our marriage on Friday, the twenty fifth of November two thousand and five at four o’clock in the afternoon Trinity Lutheran Church 63-70 Dry Harbor Road Middle Village, NY 11379
Reception to follow at half past seven in the evening Crest Hollow Country Club 8325 Jericho Turnpike Woodbury, New York 11797
JPC1125
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OK ladies I am writing all your ideas down
We are finally ordering tonight and i want to know exactly what I intend on getting!!!
JPC1125
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now I saw someones invite on another thread which was in all Caps.....what is everyones feelings on that?
SomethingBlu
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now I saw someones invite on another thread which was in all Caps.....what is everyones feelings on that?
mine was caps like that too. I did that on purpose because I just liked the way it looked. I think it's a personal preference.
SomethingBlu
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yep...see?
Thank YOU! The font is upper and lower cases, but it's similar to Copperplate Gothic so it's all caps...that does look really nice. I wanted smething really swirly so I used Citadel...the CAPS look too modern for what I was going for.
What do your invites look like?
These were mine...
ETA: This was my wording...soprt of similar to yours.
Once upon a time the stars in the heavens crossed and so we met… Together with our parents Share our day of romantic celebration as we First Middle Last and First Middle Last will exchange solemn vows of love on Friday, the twenty-seventh of May two thousand and five at half past two in the afternoon Holy Child Jesus Church 111-11 86th Avenue Richmond Hill, New York Come celebrate the union of our lives and our families.
Jen2999
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The reason the ours and us's sound weird is that is is in 1st and 3rd person
You have 1st person with the our us etc and 3rd when you write out your names..
Imagine yourself saying that to someone , it would sound weird because you refer to yourself by name instead of I
I would change it to their like the above example.
Jen2999
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Unless you do
We,
NAME NAME and NAME NAME,
together with our parents, invite you....
JPC1125
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our invites I think are very contemporary so I dont need to be formal and follow etiquette
