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SillyBeans Posted:

Please help me

Does this sound ok?


Together with their parents
Jane Smith
and
John Smith
request the honour of your presence
at their marriage
on Saturday, the thirtieth of September
Two thousand and six
at twelve-thirty in the afternoon

Reception to immediately follow




Brassgirl9 Posted:

Re: Please help me

I think that sounds fine, just remember to put the place you're getting married:o)

lilnikita Posted:

Re: Please help me


Posted by VeeandRich

Does this sound ok?


Together with their parents
Jane Smith
and
John Smith
request the honour of your presence
at their marriage
on Saturday, the thirtieth of September
Two thousand and six
at twelve-thirty in the afternoon

Reception to immediately follow






Looks good, remember that www.verseit.com can be helpful too!
SoonToBeMrs.L Posted:

Re: Please help me


Posted by Brassgirl9

I think that sounds fine, just remember to put the place you're getting married:o)



Good point!! After you add the place and it's address, it will sound really nice

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