Please help with my invitation wording

Here is what I have so far.

Invitation:

Together with their families (or with their parents)

Jessamyn Ramos (middle names???)
and
Vincent DePaola

Invite you to join
In the celebration of their marriage
Friday, the eleventh of July
Two Thousand and Eight
At Three O'Clock in the Afternoon

Christ the King Church
(do I put the address here?)
Commack, NY

OR

Because you have shared in our lives
with your friendship and love, we

Jessamyn Ramos
and
Vincent DePaola

together with our families
invite you to share in our joy
as we become husband and wife

Friday, the eleventh of July
Two Thousand and Eight
Three O'Clock in the Afternoon

Christ the King Church
(do I put the address here?)
Commack, NY

Reception Card:

The Celebration Continues...
Please join us for Cocktails, Dinner and Dancing
Seven O'Clock in the Evening

Coindre Hall
101 Browns Road
Huntington, NY


Reply Card:
We look forward to celebrating with you

Please reply by June 1, 2008

M______________________________

______ Accepts with pleasure
______Declines with regret

I personally like the 1st wording better

And I feel you should include the street address of the church on the invitation

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Posted by Annoulak

I personally like the 1st wording better

And I feel you should include the street address of the church on the invitation

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Thank you!

What about the address of the reception?

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Posted by jessamyn78

Thank you!

What about the address of the reception?

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Yes, I would, even if you include direction cards

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Posted by Annoulak

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Posted by jessamyn78

Thank you!

What about the address of the reception?

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Yes, I would, even if you include direction cards

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Thanks! I thought this would be a breeze but I kind of confused!

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Posted by jteach711

Jess, I actually like the 2nd one and your reception card sounds great

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Thanks Jess. I really want to order this week so I can stuff and send over the April break.

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Posted by jessamyn78

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Posted by jteach711

Jess, I actually like the 2nd one and your reception card sounds great

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Thanks Jess. I really want to order this week so I can stuff and send over the April break.

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YAY, we are sending so soon. I would go with the second one