Post New Topic

Please Help With Wording??

xosweetiexo Posted:

Please Help With Wording??

How can I include 'together with their parents' in this saying....


Before us lies the open road...
a future filled with adventure and love.
Please join us as we
BRIDE
and
GROOM
join our lives in marriage
on DAY
YEAR
at TIME
LOCATION
ADDRESS
CITY, STATE


Thank you!!
LeeAnne Posted:

Re: Please Help With Wording??

Before us lies the open road...
a future filled with adventure and love.
Please join us, together with our parents,
as we
BRIDE
and
GROOM
join our lives in marriage
on DAY
YEAR
at TIME
LOCATION
ADDRESS
CITY, STATE


Thank you!!
Future Mrs H Posted:

Re: Please Help With Wording??


Posted by LeeAnne

Before us lies the open road...
a future filled with adventure and love.
Please join us, together with our parents,
as we
BRIDE
and
GROOM
join our lives in marriage
on DAY
YEAR
at TIME
LOCATION
ADDRESS
CITY, STATE



Thank you!!



I would put it in the same spot
xosweetiexo Posted:

Re: Please Help With Wording??

Keep it as:


Please join us, together with our parents,


2 commas?? or just a comma after parents?
xosweetiexo Posted:

Re: Please Help With Wording??

and put the 'as we' on a different line??

LeeAnne Posted:

Re: Please Help With Wording??


Posted by cutiegirlxo

and put the 'as we' on a different line??





exactly as i have it with the commas is grammatically correct
xosweetiexo Posted:

Re: Please Help With Wording??


Posted by LeeAnne


Posted by cutiegirlxo

and put the 'as we' on a different line??





exactly as i have it with the commas is grammatically correct




Thank you!!

Reply to this topic

Log in to reply or quote a post.