please proof

our wedding invite wording

Because you have shared in our lives
with your friendship and love, we

Karin Amanda Hartmann
&
Lawrence Thomas Paretta

together with our parents, invite you to share
in the beginning of our new life together.

Please join us
Friday, the tenth of October
two thousand and eight
at four-thirty in the afternoon
when we exchange marriage vows.

St. Frances De Chantal
Wantagh, NY
Reception to follow

i guess its per-fect

No period after vows. And if you can put Together with their parents on its own line I think it might be better.

Other than that looks great!

Wait, are you getting married in the church? If so and you have a separate reception card then you don't need to add reception to follow on the bottom. That's only really necessary if the ceremony is at the RH.

looks good...maybe the T in tenth should be capitalized, & the year & time also.

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Posted by missliss

No period after vows. And if you can put Together with their parents on its own line I think it might be better.

Other than that looks great!

Wait, are you getting married in the church? If so and you have a separate reception card then you don't need to add reception to follow on the bottom. That's only really necessary if the ceremony is at the RH.

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thanks, i was wondering about that...

should there be any commas or periods? does an invite follow the same punctuation rules?

we had a similiar wording....



you should have Together with our parents on its own line


and the year should be capitalized.

no need for more commas and periods

ETA: that the 'when we exchange marriage vows' line probably shouldn't be at the bottom where you have it--but before the date.


and you can leave the reception to follow on another card...the add'l card should say


Reception to follow at
[time of reception]
[Name of Reception Hall]