Please proof my invites!!!!

Hi Ladies!
I'm hoping to finalize my invites by this week. Can you please let me know if anything looks funky?

Invitation card: do you think i should make the address 2 seperate lines, or do you think i should leave the actual address on 1 line (but add a comma after Rivervale Road)

RSVP Card: I changed the rsvp date to Sept 1. My sister JenLen warned me that i won't have enough time to get everything ready with an Oct 1 reply date!

Map Card: i'm going to change the colors so there aren't so many....


Sorry - i can't seem to get them to post on this, but they're in my album -

also kind of fuzzy (not sure why) but hopefully you can read it!!)

TIA!!!

I personally would put the address on 2 separate lines, but that's just my taste

I like the colors on the map card...in fact when I first saw it I thought how cute, it's so colorful

Looks nice overall!

i would put the address on 2 lines, i think it looks better that way, just IMO
other wise looks good

I think they look great!
We are date twins!

ok here we go, im trying to be nitpicky here:

1. i would do the address on 2 lines
2. i might consider rewording the invite to include some reference to a wedding or marriage. its implied but it just says 'special day' and its something that stood out to me
3. i would consider changing 'seats have been reserved for you' to 'seats have been reserved in your honour' because its more formal and goes with your formal invite -- i also think its better to err on the side of traditional there because the seats reserved in your honor thing isnt really that traditional and the 'you' wording stands out
4. i would change 'guest(s)' to 'guests' without the parenthesis, because it would never be 'number of guest' so it should just be plural.
5. i would put a zip code for the hotel
6. i might change 'when reserving' to 'when making reservations' or cutting it altogether.

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Posted by bluegreen08

ok here we go, im trying to be nitpicky here:

1. i would do the address on 2 lines
2. i might consider rewording the invite to include some reference to a wedding or marriage. its implied but it just says 'special day' and its something that stood out to me
3. i would consider changing 'seats have been reserved for you' to 'seats have been reserved in your honour' because its more formal and goes with your formal invite -- i also think its better to err on the side of traditional there because the seats reserved in your honor thing isnt really that traditional and the 'you' wording stands out
4. i would change 'guest(s)' to 'guests' without the parenthesis, because it would never be 'number of guest' so it should just be plural.
5. i would put a zip code for the hotel
6. i might change 'when reserving' to 'when making reservations' or cutting it altogether.

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I agree with everything you said.....also, if space is an issue on the invite and that is why the address is on one line, then maybe you could have them make the monogram on top slightly smaller to allow for an extra line of type.

Awesome! Thanks! keep the suggestions coming!!!

how about if it says
' invite you to a celebration of their marriage'