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PLEASE PROOF READ!!!!

xbutrflykissesx Posted:

PLEASE PROOF READ!!!!

“From now until forever
we share our lives and love together”

MR. AND MRS. RONALD EULIANO
REQUEST THE HONOUR OF YOUR PRESENCE
AT THE MARRIAGE OF THEIR DAUGHTER
CHELSEA DENISE EULIANO
TO
CLAUDIO ANDRES BARRIOS
SON OF MR. LUIS BARRIOS AND THE BELOVED VIVIAN TORO+
ON SUNDAY THE SIXTH OF NOVEMBER
TWO THOUSAND ELEVEN
AT THREE THIRTY IN THE AFTERNOON

BETHLEHEM ASSEMBLY OF GOD
12 EAST FAIRVIEW AVENUE
VALLEY STREAM, NEW YORK 11580

RECEPTION TO FOLLOW AT SIX THIRTY
JERICHO TERRACE
249 JERCHIO TURNPIKE
MINEOLA, NEW YORK 11501


(I JUST COPIED AND PASTED LOL)
Summer Bride 2011 Posted:

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You have one word spelled incorrectly. The correct spelling is Jericho.

adamsgirl2011 Posted:

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Presence and two thousand and eleven

nic2011 Posted:

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Posted by Summer Bride 2011

You have one word spelled incorrectly. The correct spelling is Jericho.



yep in the address

i'd also say ' half past three' and 'half past six' rather than three thirty and six thirty.
nic2011 Posted:

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Posted by adamsgirl2011

Presence and two thousand and eleven



two thousand eleven is correct as written originally. the 'and' represents a decimal in mathematical terms.
bartgirl12 Posted:

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Posted by adamsgirl2011

Presence and two thousand and eleven



two thousand eleven is correct. When you add the 'and' it means a decimal point. I only know this because I originally put an 'and' and everyone quickly ripped me apart and corrected it. haha. but def no 'and'
adamsgirl2011 Posted:

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Posted by bartgirl12


Posted by adamsgirl2011

Presence and two thousand and eleven



two thousand eleven is correct. When you add the 'and' it means a decimal point. I only know this because I originally put an 'and' and everyone quickly ripped me apart and corrected it. haha. but def no 'and'[/QUOT

Yes you are correct
xbutrflykissesx Posted:

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Posted by nic2011


Posted by Summer Bride 2011

You have one word spelled incorrectly. The correct spelling is Jericho.



yep in the address

i'd also say ' half past three' and 'half past six' rather than three thirty and six thirty.




really half past three? how come? thanks tho...jw lol
NYtherapist Posted:

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It should read: half past three o'clock in the afternoon. Hope that helps :). Also, as your parents are hosting, and you have the same last name, generally,your last name does not appear. It should be just your first and middle.

xbutrflykissesx Posted:

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Posted by NYtherapist

It should read: half past three o'clock in the afternoon. Hope that helps :). Also, as your parents are hosting, and you have the same last name, generally,your last name does not appear. It should be just your first and middle.




okay thanks! then what about FH's last name? put it or no? also do i have to write cocktail hour and reception to follow..or just reception to follow like i have?

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