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Please proofread

JamDancer Posted:

Please proofread

probably ordering the invite part of our pocketfolds tonight.. is this ok

Mr. and Mrs. John Smith
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter
Rebecca ______
to
Daniel _______
son of Mr. and Mrs. John Jones
Friday, the ninth of October
Two thousand and nine
at four o' clock in the afternoon
St. Isidore Roman Catholic Church
Riverhead, New York


The only think I'm really unsure about is, if I even have the room, should I include the actual street address of the church? Or is the town sufficient...
Summertimegal424 Posted:

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i would put the address

meg922 Posted:

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I'm only putting the town on mine, but I'm going to include the address and directions separately.

Deeglasser Posted:

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we included the street address for the church on our invitations...

AFutureBride Posted:

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for a church i would def put the street address because it may be hard to find otherwise.

Celeste617 Posted:

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Posted by AFutureBride

for a church i would def put the street address because it may be hard to find otherwise.



I agree
coldasice217 Posted:

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If you're also including a direction card, I don't think that you need to put the street address. Also, are the blanks for middle names? If so that is fine, but if they are blanks for real last names then I don't think you need to pout the last names twice.

MOG0809 Posted:

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Are you spelling 'honour' that way purpose?
kbond06 Posted:

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Looks good to me. If ur attaching a direction card I see no need to add street address. Imo

JamDancer Posted:

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yea honour is spelled that way on purpose.

I do have a direction card so I guess I don't need the street address on there.

Last question, should it say 'St. Isidore Roman Catholic Church' or can it just be 'St. Isidore Church'?
mlcvln129 Posted:

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Posted by JamDancer

yea honour is spelled that way on purpose.

I do have a direction card so I guess I don't need the street address on there.

Last question, should it say 'St. Isidore Roman Catholic Church' or can it just be 'St. Isidore Church'?



I would go by the church's official name. If they are known as 'St. Isidore RC Church' and they go by it in local publications, then I would put that on the invite. I highly doubt that there's another St. Isidore in Riverhead (or wherever it was--I can't remember!!), but play it safe and use the name that the church regularly goes by.

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