How does this sound? My mom made a few suggestions, but figured I'd see what you girls thought...
GT143EA
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It looks great Gina!
AugustBridein09
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It looks perfect to me. The wording sounds great.
Tori9299
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Looks good
PoppedInASnap
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I think it sounds great actually!
MrsGRod09
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It's beautiful and the word sounds great.
gina409
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i think it looks perfect
PROBM
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awesome, they look great , wording/spelling looks good ...congrats!!!
littlepixie12
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It sounds good to me and it looks great!
BarbieGrl10
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Looks good.... just one thing... the date and time are not written out...I'm guessing you wanted it that way though? ex: 11:30 or Half passed eleven
Fall BZ 2009
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I like it
FuTuRe MrS MaZz
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Posted by BarbieGrl10
Looks good.... just one thing... the date and time are not written out...I'm guessing you wanted it that way though? ex: 11:30 or Half passed eleven
i orginally had it that way but i didnt like the formality of it so i changed it... for what im goin for, it woulda looked too wordy
Kristina2009
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Looks great Gina.
I love the ___ of ___ will attend. I wish I saw that before I ordered mine.
We are worried about people bringing uninvited guests.
coldasice217
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It looks good for me...I know you're not going for super formal and stuffy, so I'm not sure if you would want to say Reception to immediately follow instead? Just something about the way it's worded right now doesn't flow right for me.
MrsCastanedain09
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It looks fantastic! Congrats
Celeste617
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Looks great!
BarbieGrl10
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Posted by FuTuRe MrS MaZz
Posted by BarbieGrl10
Looks good.... just one thing... the date and time are not written out...I'm guessing you wanted it that way though? ex: 11:30 or Half passed eleven
i orginally had it that way but i didnt like the formality of it so i changed it... for what im goin for, it woulda looked too wordy
