Please proofread our invites!

INVITATION

Mr. and Mrs. Richard _______
and
Mr. and Mrs. Jeffrey _______
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their children
Christine Marie
and
Jeffrey John Thomas
on Sunday, the tenth of August
two thousand and eight
at two o’clock in the afternoon
The Parish of the Holy Cross
95 Old Nichols Road
Nesconset, New York 11767



RECEPTION CARD

We invite you to join us as
the celebration continues!

Cocktails at six o’clock
Dinner immediately following
Chateau La Mer
845 South Wellwood Avenue
Lindenhurst, New York 11757




RESPONSE CARD

Kindly respond on or before
the first of July

M _________________________

_____ will attend
_____ will not attend



I'm not sure if all of the capitals are correct or not of if some more words should be capitalized...what do you girls think??? Thanks!

Yay Christine!!!! Looks great!

Looks great

Thank you very much! This part makes it soooo real!!!!

I think it should be

Christine Marie
To
Jeffrey John Thomas

ETA: Other than that it looks great

As long as you are consistent, you can do the capitalization however you want. You seem to be capitalizing proper names only, which is fine. If you wanted to capitalize the beginning of each line that is fine too.

Upon first read everything looks good, the only things I might change are:

1. We invite you to join us
as the celebration continues!

(i moved 'as' to the second line)

2. I would get rid of the 'on' before 'Sunday' -- again more formal

3. Also, not sure how you are spacing the invite but I would leave a little more space between your names and the rest of the invite text, and maybe a little more space above the Parish info

4. are you doing a direction card for the church? I would normally suggest just doing the city and state (not the street address and zip) on the actual invitation and then include a direction card. it's more formal this way. however, its not wrong to include the full street address

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Posted by babieblueeyez96

INVITATION

Mr. and Mrs. Richard _______
and
Mr. and Mrs. Jeffrey _______
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their children
Christine Marie
and
Jeffrey John Thomas
on Sunday, the tenth of August
two thousand and eight
at two o’clock in the afternoon
The Parish of the Holy Cross
95 Old Nichols Road
Nesconset, New York 11767



RECEPTION CARD

We invite you to join us as
the celebration continues!

Cocktails at six o’clock
Dinner immediately following
Chateau La Mer
845 South Wellwood Avenue
Lindenhurst, New York 11757




RESPONSE CARD

Kindly respond on or before
the first of July

M _________________________

_____ will attend
_____ will not attend



I'm not sure if all of the capitals are correct or not of if some more words should be capitalized...what do you girls think??? Thanks!

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just so you know, i originally had 'honour' on my invitation, but it is supposed to match the response card if you wrote 'the favour of a reply...' and since I didn't put 'favour' on my response card, i wrote mine exactly like yours, i changed it back to 'honor' so it matched.

that is totally up to you. i don't think it matters either way. i had it one way and then changed it. it's really a personal preference i guess b/c i am having a somewhat formal wedding, i'd like to think ,and i took out the 'u'