Please tell me how this invite wording sounds (Quick Repsonses Needed)
mrswask
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We wanted to do 'together with our families' - or something like that b/c besides FH and I - my grandma is the biggest contributor. I have been going crazy with the wording because nothing sounds right. I finally (with the help of a BM) came up with the following - please tell me what you think! We are ordering TOMORROW!!! THanks so much!!
The honour of your presence is requested by the families of
Michal
And
Jamie
as they are joined together in marriage Sunday, the first of August etc etc!!!
nj42305
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I think its perfect
Xelindrya
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looks fine to me
LIJuneBride
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We did something similar Michal... it went something like this:
Together with their families
Gloria
and
David
request the honour of your presence
etc
september2004
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Posted by LIJuneBride
We did something similar Michal... it went something like this:
Together with their families
Gloria
and
David
request the honour of your presence
etc
I like this one...
MegLehner
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Posted by september2004
Posted by LIJuneBride
We did something similar Michal... it went something like this:
Together with their families
Gloria
and
David
request the honour of your presence
etc
I like this one...
I think I like this one better too 'as they are joined together in marriage' sounds a little too wordy to me
mrswask
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Posted by LIJuneBride
We did something similar Michal... it went something like this:
Together with their families
Gloria
and
David
request the honour of your presence
etc
Thanks guys!! The only reason I didn't love the Together with their families Michal
and
Jamie
is because I wanted our names more evenly spaced out in the middle of the invite
LIJuneBride
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We put a quote above ours to even it out a little - wherever you're getting your invites they can help you choose one. Ours was 'Special moments are meant to be shared...'
BriBri529
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I think it sounds nice
smilealways
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Looks nice to me! I like the spacing too. :o)
neen
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Sounds great!
OSCARtheGROOM
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I like it!
July2004Bride
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Sounds good.
oakslady
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Posted by MegLehner
Posted by september2004
Posted by LIJuneBride
We did something similar Michal... it went something like this:
Together with their families
Gloria
and
David
request the honour of your presence
etc
I like this one...
I think I like this one better too 'as they are joined together in marriage' sounds a little too wordy to me
i like that too
Smolokoff
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