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program wording- is this ok?? please help!

jags77 Posted:

program wording- is this ok?? please help!

this is what i have for the last page of my wedding program for the thank yous. i am getting no useful feedback from FH or friends. thanks!

Thank You

Some people come into
our lives and quickly go.
Some stay for a while
And leave footprints on
Our hearts. And we are
Never, ever the same.

(then there is a little picture of a flower to divide it up from the bottom)

We would like to thank our friends and family for sharing in our joy and happiness on this day; thanks to each of you who have traveled near and far to celebrate this day with us.

A very special thanks to our Bridal Party, for being such an integral part of this day and our lives, especially to our brothers who made our lives so much more interesting and for all teh wonderful memories and stories we have growing up.

Lastly, we thank our amazing parents, who brought us where we are today. Your examples of faith, hope, love, and respect will forever guide us in the way we appreciate and cherish one another. We could never thank you enough for all of your unconditional love, guidance, and support.

With love,

Jyoti & Eric
November 15th, 2003

One more thing- I want to add a line like this in somewhere but don't know where it's most appropriate-

'we want to remember those who could not join us; we know they are with us in spirit.'

please be honest- if it's too wordy or too long or just s*cks- please tell me. thanks!!
franksbride Posted:

Re: program wording- is this ok?? please help!

I think it's great! And, I would add that line at the end...just like that, at the end.

OctBride05 Posted:

Re: program wording- is this ok?? please help!

i think it sounds great.

pschica Posted:

Re: program wording- is this ok?? please help!

it sounds wonderful.....very nice - i love that thank you poem!



(PS - i am not criticizing and i know i always misspell words in my posts but theres a typo in it if you copied and pasted - if not, nevermind!!)
rcs Posted:

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I think that sounds perfect....

alixgirl Posted:

Re: program wording- is this ok?? please help!

I like it. I would put the line honoring those no longer with us at the end of the program (or on the back page) depending on how u have designed your program.
jags77 Posted:

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no- i didn't copy and paste- i was trying to type it all quickly. THANKS THOUGH!!

GIGIBRIDE04 Posted:

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I LIKE IT

112903 Posted:

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I like it very much

nov2004bride Posted:

Re: program wording- is this ok?? please help!

I think it's great and I agree that the last line should be either last or on the back. I went to a wedding once and they had the same sort of line at the back with a list of very special people to the bride and groom that passed away. Ex. grandparents, etc.

Spring Wedding Posted:

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It sound great!!

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