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proof my invite PLEASE!

Alyssa79 Posted:

proof my invite PLEASE!

i've been staring at it so i'm sure i'm missing something.

let me know what you think about the fonts, the wording, etc, etc.

This will not be my design so i'm just looking for feedback on wording and stuff. THANKS
RitasEngaged Posted:

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i would change at a bridal shower to 'her'
Lsorrent Posted:

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Looks great to me
MongieToBe Posted:

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I really like the font....but 'spring' should not be capitalized...seasons are all lowercase
cateydee Posted:

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i wouldnt capitalize 'spring'

JC297 Posted:

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Love the wording, except the part by bridal shower. It doesnt seem to flow. maybe 'at her bridal shower'

runnerbride1023 Posted:

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Agree with not capitalizing 'Spring'

Also - this is probably going to sound knit-picky - but I would replace the 'Please' before RSVP to 'Kindly'. The 'P' in RSVP means please so its redundant. (My mom made me change my e-party invites otherwise I'd never know)


Rosalind_75 Posted:

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looks great to me

you are going to be soooooooo tired that day
sorry
MrsSx2 Posted:

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Posted by RitasEngaged

i would change at a bridal shower to 'her'



ITA, plus I wouldn't capitalize 'Spring'. OTher than that, its great!
JoanneAndJustin Posted:

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Like everyone else said:

at her Bridal Shower

and spring is lower case.
Clover23 Posted:

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I am not a fan of the wording at all. It just doesn't flow right to me. But I'm an a$$hole so what do I know.
sugarnspice Posted:

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going to have to be a jerk and agree with Elizabeth... i dont like it, not sure why... BUT if you like it, then I would just change 'good wishes' to 'well wishes'

sorry chickie but you know im always honest
MikesBride2B Posted:

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Posted by APastries2010

going to have to be a jerk and agree with Elizabeth... i dont like it, not sure why... BUT if you like it, then I would just change 'good wishes' to 'well wishes'

sorry chickie but you know im always honest



I agree...it seems a little too flowy/touchy feelyish. Sorry
KatieG2010 Posted:

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i don't like how all the fonts are different. also i don't like the wording ... oh and if you are saying April 17th, you should say April 3rd for... sorry jmo

Alyssa79 Posted:

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Posted by Clover23

I am not a fan of the wording at all. It just doesn't flow right to me. But I'm an a$$hole so what do I know.



so what would you do to change it you big a$$hole?

i'm keeping the 'spring' theme though. invites will have flowers and butterflies on them


eta: i refuse to have the 'typical' wording EVERY SNGLE bridal invitation has.



Ali, bust out your skills on this one
Alyssa79 Posted:

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Posted by KatieG2010

i don't like how all the fonts are different. also i don't like the wording ... oh and if you are saying April 17th, you should say April 3rd for... sorry jmo



there's actually only 2 1/2 fonts being used. i got crafty. you can go up to 3 different fonts in the design world

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