I would change 'Cocktails, dinner and reception' to 'Cocktails, dinner and dancing'...
bella1028
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they look excellent...only thing i thought maybe is to make the dinner, cocktails and reception(i think thats what it said) all on one line and then immediately following under it...it seems like those 3 should be on the same line???? just my thoughts...
hannahshim
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isnt the half past Six look weird??
should the S be capitalized? do i need a dash between half past?
bella1028
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Posted by hannahshim
isnt the half past Six look weird??
should the S be capitalized? do i need a dash between half past?
maybe it should be lower cased like the rest of the words in that sentence??? not sure, can you try to see what it will look like?
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Posted by hannahshim
isnt the half past Six look weird??
should the S be capitalized? do i need a dash between half past?
I wouldn't put a dash..
Also 'Direction' should be 'Directions'
lovebear7800
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looks good.
KarinAmanda
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should there be a 's' at the end of regret on the RSVP? i think no, but i might be wrong?
hannahshim
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Posted by KarinAmanda
should there be a 's' at the end of regret on the RSVP? i think no, but i might be wrong?
yea i think so thanks so much!!
kimNanthony
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Should it say directions instead of direction?
Mrs. V 2008
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Posted by LuvMyAlfonse
Looks good!!!!!
I would change 'Cocktails, dinner and reception' to 'Cocktails, dinner and dancing'...
they look great ..and i agree
bella1028
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I think it is perfect now ...the few changes worked
lovebear7800
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looks better with the comm tha u added.
Annoulak
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I would change the directions from Queens...Instead of 'Turn left under bridge onto Lakeville Road' I would say 'Turn left at first light (under bridge) onto Lakeville Road'
I've gotten off at that exit and it can be a bit confusing if you don't know where you're going...if you say make left at first light, they'll know to get into the left lane once they get off at that exit.
hannahshim
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one more question girls
the on before Saturday should the 'o' be capitalized?
bella1028
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Posted by hannahshim
one more question girls
the on before Saturday should the 'o' be capitalized?
i dont think so...the a in at is not...so i would keep it consistent
hannahshim
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Posted by Annoulak
I would change the directions from Queens...Instead of 'Turn left under bridge onto Lakeville Road' I would say 'Turn left at first light (under bridge) onto Lakeville Road'
I've gotten off at that exit and it can be a bit confusing if you don't know where you're going...if you say make left at first light, they'll know to get into the left lane once they get off at that exit.
OMGGG thanks soo much that seems ALOT easier I know what your talking about you cant even relaly see the bridge until you pass it
Mrs. V 2008
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one more question girls
the on before Saturday should the 'o' be capitalized?
nope..i don't think its necessary
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