Proof reading Invitation Wording once again...last time hopefully!

I posted the invitation wording I had in mind but with the suggestions of a few ladies and an input of FH we decided to change some of the wording. Can you ladies PLEASE proof read and let me know what you think???
Thank you once again!

[Quote]
Bride
&
Groom
together with their parents
[parents of the bride]
and
[mother of the groom]
invite you to share in the joy
when they exchange marriage vows
and begin their new life together
Sunday, the third of August
two thousand eight
at two thirty in the afternoon

Chateau Briand
440 Old Country Road
Carle Place, New York

Adult reception immediately following

Umm IMHO- I think it should be

share in THEIR joy
AS they exchange..

But, again..JMO.

Otherwise I think it sounds great!

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Posted by DeeluvsVinny

Umm IMHO- I think it should be

share in THEIR joy
AS they exchange..

But, again..JMO.

Otherwise I think it sounds great!

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I agree!! Make that one change if you like it - and it's great!

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Posted by DeeluvsVinny

Umm IMHO- I think it should be

share in THEIR joy
AS they exchange..

But, again..JMO.

Otherwise I think it sounds great!

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ooooooooooooooooo thats what i was going to say too!!!