In anticipation of Lisa and David's big day, We wouldn't want it any other way. Than in the company of those near and dear, without whom we would never have gotten here. In great food, wine and conversation we will delight, Please join us at Pomodoro's on July 28, half past six on Friday night.
sarahradio5
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I think it needs a BIT more work... you're off to a great start! Take a break from it and go back to it... that's when things usually fall into place better. Let me know if you would like any help! I tend to be pretty good at this stuff. .
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PLEASE HELP ME!!!! The thing is that we are paying for the RD and we aren't really having a rehearsal. so just an invite telling our friends and family that we are doing a dinner. ahhhh. Help!!! TIA
sarahradio5
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Okay... I'm tired... but here's what I came up with. I may be able to add more tomorrow with the 'people who mean the most' verse. I just think it's best to keep it in the same 'person' throughout the poem so that it flows better....
but that's just me! HTH!
Pre-Wedding Get Together!
The Night Before Lisa and David Say 'I Do' They'd love to spend Some time with You!
Please meet at Pomodoro's Friday, July 28th, 6:30 is the time To drink, laugh and celebrate!
Okay... so first of all... I wouldn't CALL it a Rehearsal Dinner because they're all going to wonder when the rehearsal is. Call it a Casual Get Together! Or Our Last Night Before We Tie the Knot!
LisaJill
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Love it!!! Thank you sooo much.
Should I change July 28th to July Twenty-Eight (to rhyme with celebrate?
Thanks and maybe call it Wedding Weekend dinner? Something like that.. because wedding is on sunday? Let me know, I am going to print them tonight -- running behind schedule
Pre-Wedding Get Together!
The Night Before Lisa and David Say 'I Do' They'd love to spend Some time with You!
Please meet at Pomodoro's Friday, July 28th, 6:30 is the time To drink, laugh and celebrate!
sarahradio5
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Posted by LisaJill
Love it!!! Thank you sooo much.
Should I change July 28th to July Twenty-Eight (to rhyme with celebrate?
Thanks and maybe call it Wedding Weekend dinner? Something like that.. because wedding is on sunday? Let me know, I am going to print them tonight -- running behind schedule
Pre-Wedding Get Together!
Two Nights Before Lisa and David Say 'I Do' They'd love to spend Some time with You!
Please meet at Pomodoro's Friday, July 28th, 6:30 is the time To drink, laugh and celebrate!
I think that sounds great the way it is (if you like it, of course!) I'm glad I could help! . (I changed it to Two Nights Before)
Good luck!
sarahradio5
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and I'm sorry I didn't get back to you last night... my eyes were falling out of my head. I had to get to sleep!!
