RD Invite QUESTION

Do you girls like this......

It’s a year in the making, the day will soon arrive.
There’s just one thing that's left to do, before we take the dive.

We would first like to express to you,
how truly thankful that we are.
We think there is no better place to meet, than at an Irish bar.

There’s no actual rehearsal,
so we hope that you don’t mind,
If you could come and eat with us,
and have a good ole' time.

Thoughts????? Do you like it? Love It? Hate it? Think it needs tweaking????

i dunno - i feel like it's not right yet - but that could be because i've been staring at it for more than an hour!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted by davenjess

Do you girls like this......

It’s a year in the making, the day will soon arrive.
There’s just one thing that's left to do, before we take the dive.

We would first like to express to you,
how truly thankful that we are.
We think there is no better place to meet, than at an Irish bar.

There’s no actual rehearsal,
so we hope that you don’t mind,
If you could come and eat with us,
and have a good ole' time.

Thoughts????? Do you like it? Love It? Hate it? Think it needs tweaking????

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You could also do ' there's just one thing that's left to do, before we say our I do's'

And I'm not sure if 'how trult thankful THAT we are' im not sure if you need the that?

Just some suggestions, but I really don't think i'd change a thing!