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Repost from BHB - In Dire Need of Recpetion card wording

skew Posted:

Repost from BHB - In Dire Need of Recpetion card wording

we are odering invites this week and i am stumped in re: reception card wording. we are having a mass at the church at 3:00 and then a tented beach reception (cocktail hour) at 5:00. i would like to somehow mention that the reception is outside (not a hall). The llocation includes the word beach, but some people may still think that it is an inside facility.

any advice?

maybe:

join us by the bay for cocktails and reception
five o'clock

location
dino1109 Posted:

Re: Repost from BHB - In Dire Need of Recpetion card wording

Im not rally sure how to wrod it...i like what you said

or how about

Join us under the stars, with the sand at our feet...
wc0143 Posted:

Re: Repost from BHB - In Dire Need of Recpetion card wording


Posted by dino1109

or how about

Join us under the stars, with the sand at our feet...



Ooooh!!! Nice!!

Or something about the ocean's breeze ...
skew Posted:

Re: Repost from BHB - In Dire Need of Recpetion card wording

someone suggested

Join us for an outdoor reception by the bay

i really like this. what would need to be capitalized (Bay)?
tourist Posted:

Re: Repost from BHB - In Dire Need of Recpetion card wording

no , I don't think you need to capitalize it unless you use the whole name of the bay.

In college,we always had 'under the tent ' dances, so you could say that too, join us for an undee the tent reception, but that might sound a little too much like camping.

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