review my wording pls....

i keep reading this over and over again. Sometimes it looks ok to me other times i feel like a 2 yr old wrote it...


Alana Leah G----
and
Alexander D---
together with their parents
Mr. and Mrs. Alan G----
and
Mr. and Mrs. Domingo D----
request the honor of your presence
as they exchange marriage vows and
begin their new life together
on Friday, the fifth of January
two thousand and seven
at four o'clock in the afternoon

Saint Dominics Chapel
Oyster Bay,New York

there should be a space in between the Oyster Bay, and the New York

otherwise, looks good

ERRRRR i have a space on my sample from my girl whos doing the invites!!

whats wrong w me?! lol

I used these great samples when I created my invitation.

http://www.invitationconsultants.com/sww-bride-and-groom.asp

More here:

http://www.invitationconsultants.com/sww-main.asp

HTH :)

Your wording sounds fine! I made my text all caps except the names are in script so it looks more clean. :D

Instead of writing it this way:

as they exchange marriage vows and
begin their new life together

i would write:

as they exchange marraige vows
and begin their new life together

Apostrophe after Dominic (Shoudl be Dominic's)

Also, I would put
Together with their parents before your names and put you and FH after the aprents in the middle of the invite....

Also honour is more traditional and is used when getting married in a church. technically not appropriate if it's outside a house of worship.