RP> Is this okay???

We have less than 2 weeks to go and still people haven't booked their rooms...PLUS, my mom wants me to let certain OOT guests know that there will be a brunch. Lots of people plan on leaving right after the wedding, but my mom wants me to tell people that they are welcome to stay for the brunch the following morning (the wedding ends at 5:30pm). Is this okay to write??


Krista and Stefan
October 14, 2006

We’re so happy you can make it to our wedding and help us celebrate!!!
Don’t forget, we’ve blocked off rooms at the
Hilton Garden Inn Hotel
3485 Veterans Memorial Highway
Ronkonkoma, New York 11779
631-738-7800

We would also like to invite you to continue the celebration at a brunch being held by the bride’s parents on Sunday, October 15, 2006 at the hotel from 8:00am through 12:00pm. All are welcome!!!

We look forward to sharing this wonderful time with you!!

~Krista and Stefan

I think what you have is good!!

I may of worded mine a bit more formal... but its all a matter of taste!!

Krista and Stefan
October 14, 2006

Mr. & Mrs. (you parents) cordially invite you to a brunch on Sunday, October 15, 2006, 8:00am at the Hilton Garden Inn Hotel.

For your convenience, rooms have been blocked at the hotel the night of the wedding so that you may join Mr. & Mrs. (YOU) to celebrate their first breakfast together as husband and wife.

Hilton Garden Inn Hotel
3485 Veterans Memorial Highway
Ronkonkoma, New York 11779
631-738-7800

We look forward to sharing this wonderful time with you!