RP: Need help with invite wording QUICK!

Is this okay?

Mr. and Mrs. John Mxxxx
Request the honour of your presence
At the marriage of their daughter
Krista Lynn
to
Stefan Bruno Gxxxxx
Son of Mr. and Mrs. James Gxxxx
Saturday, the fourteenth of October
Two thousand and six
at ten o’clock in the morning
Byzantine Catholic Church of the Resurrection
Smithtown, New York


Reception card:
Reception
At half past twelve o’clock
Giorgio’s at Fox Hill
Baiting Hollow, New York


RSVP card:
The favour of a reply is requested before the fifteenth of August
M____________________________________
______ accepts with pleasure
______ declines with regret

I think that's perfect, I've seen lots of invitations very similar to that.
Good Luck

I think it sounds fine except I don't think you need to have the sons last name.
Mr. and Mrs. John Mxxxx
Request the honour of your presence
At the marriage of their daughter
Krista Lynn
to
Stefan Bruno
Son of Mr. and Mrs. James Gxxxx

JMO.

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Posted by MrsStefan


Reception card:
Reception
At half past twelve o’clock
Giorgio’s at Fox Hill
Baiting Hollow, New York


RSVP card:
The favour of a reply is requested before the fifteenth of August
M____________________________________
______ accepts with pleasure
______ declines with regret

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Two things...

I think for the reception card, you would just write half past twelve. I don't think you put o'clock.

Also, I haven't done my RSVP cards or invitations yet, but is there a place where the guest is supposed to notate how many people would be coming?

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Posted by lauren09

it sounds perfect. you are supposed to put the son's last name even when you write son of. also, you should have o'clock.

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For the invitation, o'clock is fine. But, for the reception card, I think when you're writing 'half past', if would be 'half past twelve in the afternoon'. If the reception as AT 12 o'clock, I think THEN you write o'clock. But the 'half past' changes that... I THINK.

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Posted by sarahradio5

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Posted by MrsStefan


Reception card:
Reception
At half past twelve o’clock
Giorgio’s at Fox Hill
Baiting Hollow, New York


RSVP card:
The favour of a reply is requested before the fifteenth of August
M____________________________________
______ accepts with pleasure
______ declines with regret

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Two things...

I think for the reception card, you would just write half past twelve. I don't think you put o'clock.

Also, I haven't done my RSVP cards or invitations yet, but is there a place where the guest is supposed to notate how many people would be coming?

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I agree with the number of guests just in case you invite someone 'and guest' and they will only be coming by themselves to avoid any confusion.