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Save the Date wording help

lilmrs Posted: Sep 17, 2002 09:42 PM+

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Posted: Sep 17, 2002 09:42 PM

Save the Date wording help

How do you put in where you have hotel rooms blocked. This is what we have:

Debbie and Darren will marry on
May 17th, 2003
Flowerfield, St. James, New York.

Invitation to follow.

then we have our web site address.....how do I lead into talking about the hotels??

christy Posted: Sep 17, 2002 09:54 PM+

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Posted: Sep 17, 2002 09:54 PM

Re: Save the Date wording help

good question...I need to know too. Sorry I couldnt help!

MISHY Posted: Sep 17, 2002 10:08 PM+

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Posted: Sep 17, 2002 10:08 PM

Re: Save the Date wording help

MY FI AND I JUST GOT ONE IN THE MAIL FOR A WEDDING IN PENNSYLVANIA

WE HOPE THAT YOU WILL BE ABLE TO JOIN US ON OUR WEDDING DAY AT (YADDA YADDA YA) IT IS LOCATED NEAR(YADDA YA)

THE RECEPTION SHOULD END AROUND -----
THOSE OF YOU WHO WISH TO STAY IN AREA, WE HAVE LISTED BELOW THE NUMBER/NUMBERS OF HOTELS/MOTELS INCLUDE PRICE ARRANGEMENTS, THE LATEST THEY SHOULD MAKE RESERVATIONS BY AND TO GET THE SPECIAL RATE DON'T FORGET TO MENTION FOR THEM TO STATE WHAT WEDDING PARTY THEY ARE WITH.. THEN THEY GAVE DETAILS OF SOME FUN THINGS TO DO IF THE GUESTS WANT TO MAKE A WEEKEND OF IT..

GOOD LUCK..

zac1228 Posted: Sep 17, 2002 11:10 PM+

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Posted: Sep 17, 2002 11:10 PM

Re: Save the Date wording help

We have done an actual letter. And we start with the typical save-the-date stuff and then say that 'we would like to take this opportunity to provide you with information on hotels in the area as well as give you a list of things to do around town to keep yourselves entertained' (we are getting married Memorial Day weekend, so if people that are traveling far wanted to make a vacation out of it, we wanted to give them as much info as possible.) We go on to say where the two of us, our families, and our bridal party are staying, and then give them all the info. We actually just separted it by making it a separate section after that with the heading 'Hotel Information.'