the only thing i would change is to just write 'westbury, new york' and leave out 'long island'
otherwise looks good!
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the only thing i would change is to just write 'westbury, new york' and leave out 'long island'
otherwise looks good!
I agree, I would leave out Long Island
Ericab1980
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I thought there was another Westbury in NY? Thats why everyone told me to use LI to make it clear..(most of the guest arent from LI)
laural2979
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the only thing i would change is to just write 'westbury, new york' and leave out 'long island'
otherwise looks good!
I agree. If you want to leave that in then at least add a comma.
Westbury, Long Island, New York
KD1279
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Cocktail and Dinner reception to follow is that worded properly?? Just Cocktail ????
eunicsd006
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i would take the word in out...it sounds better ..the begining other than that it sounds good
werock0709
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I would write Cocktail Hour and Reception to Follow.
KD1279
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I would write Cocktail Hour and Reception to Follow.
Thats it thats what I meant. You can barely see it, but its your invites have them your way!!!!
Pinkiegirll07
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Definitely agree on taking out LI...but the invite looks great!!
hayleyandsteve
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I would write Cocktail Hour and Reception to Follow.
i would just write 'reception to follow' or just omit that completely. i think it's implied
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Posted by hayleyandsteve
the only thing i would change is to just write 'westbury, new york' and leave out 'long island'
otherwise looks good!
I agree. If you want to leave that in then at least add a comma.
Westbury, Long Island, New York
I agree. Or do: Westbury, Long Island New York
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i'm thinking since ur probably going have directions in the invite, u shuold be ok with just westbury, NY. also i would omit cocktail and just put reception to follow. other than that they look great!
PegaLega
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I think fourteenth is supposed to be hyphenated...or am I just being silly?
four-teenth-ya NO hyphenate
PapayaChic
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You're guests wont get confused especially with direction cards!!!!!!!!!
I would just do Westbury, New York
and if you like that last line
its Cocktails (with and S) and Dinner Reception to follow
bettybcafe
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I think fourteenth is supposed to be hyphenated...or am I just being silly?
four-teenth-ya NO hyphenate
..no u are silly..
But I agree with the above posters..on the omitting of LI and the reception wording
