So Im not a poet - SO WHAT!!!

Goldi1021 Posted: Dec 19, 2005 09:46 PM

So Im not a poet - SO WHAT!!!

I Wanted to give my BP bags filled with stuff for their gifts so I made little poems to attach to each part. Here it goes: AHEM!

Use this bag
To help you carry
The things you need
As the two of us marry!

Wear this pendant.
Let it shine.
As you walk
In a line.

Wear these earrings
In your ears.
And remember us
Throughout the years.

Wear this hoodie
As we all dress
So your hair and make-up
Won’t end up a mess!

Wear these slippers
On your feet
‘Cause we don’t want to see
You in your seat!

Ok so its lame and hokey and they will mock me but what can ya do!

BlueTulip Posted: Dec 19, 2005 09:48 PM

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You are a horrible poet-I think that is awesome!

Jen2999 Posted: Dec 19, 2005 09:49 PM

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sooo cute leslie

I just made up a bunch of poems for my secret santa gifts at work.

shellnroc Posted: Dec 19, 2005 09:51 PM

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I think that is AWESOME too!!!!!!!!!!!!

wendy1220 Posted: Dec 19, 2005 09:53 PM

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I like it, definitely more creative than I could come up with. The earings your giving them are beautiful by the way.

Goldi1021 Posted: Dec 19, 2005 09:53 PM

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Or should the necklace verse be:

Wear this pendant.
All the while.
As you walk
Down the aisle

OR

Wear this pendant.
With class and style.
As you walk
Down the aisle

I dunno. Im such a dorky lame-a$$

BlueTulip Posted: Dec 19, 2005 09:57 PM

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Posted by Goldi1021

Or should the necklace verse be:

Wear this pendant.
All the while.
As you walk
Down the aisle

OR

Wear this pendant.
With class and style.
As you walk
Down the aisle

I dunno. Im such a dorky lame-a$$

No-I don't think you should change any of them. Their charm is that they are not trying to be fancy-schmancy poems-just cute rhymes that tell the girls what they are for.

steflily Posted: Dec 19, 2005 09:58 PM

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Posted by Goldi1021

Wear this pendant.
With class and style.
As you walk
Down the aisle

I dunno. Im such a dorky lame-a$$

Leslie -

This one is perfect!
And you're not! They will love it!

wendy1220 Posted: Dec 19, 2005 10:06 PM

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Posted by steflily

Posted by Goldi1021

Wear this pendant.
With class and style.
As you walk
Down the aisle

I dunno. Im such a dorky lame-a$$

Leslie -

This one is perfect!
And you're not! They will love it!

I like this one also.

Soon2BeMrs2006 Posted: Dec 19, 2005 10:40 PM

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leslie they will love it.

cmastro25 Posted: Dec 19, 2005 11:13 PM

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Leslie, I think it's great. It's personal and they'll know that you took care to come up with the lines. I likey!

CrescentBride606 Posted: Dec 19, 2005 11:28 PM

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i love love love the sweatpants? or sweatshirts? i can't tell what they are...where did you get them..please fm me!

BKtoLI Posted: Dec 19, 2005 11:53 PM

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I'm not a poet either!!! But in the long run, I think they'll appreciate the effort more than anything!!!

MattsBride Posted: Dec 19, 2005 11:57 PM

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I think that is so sweet! Your BP will love it!

EmberLynn Posted: Dec 19, 2005 11:59 PM

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I can't believe it, very soon the first of us are going to be married!

gNi1125 Posted: Dec 20, 2005 12:00 AM

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Aww...love it Leslie!

glinda_goodwitch Posted: Dec 20, 2005 12:08 AM

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Posted by Goldi1021

Or should the necklace verse be:

Wear this pendant.
All the while.
As you walk
Down the aisle

OR

Wear this pendant.
With class and style.
As you walk
Down the aisle

I dunno. Im such a dorky lame-a$$

I think your poems are awesome! I personally Like how the first one flows: wear this pendant, all the while...

Laura&Phil Posted: Dec 20, 2005 03:43 AM

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Part of the charm is that they aren't perfect poems- that way they know that you made them up!! I love the necklaces by the way! The whole thing is great!!!