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thank you card help

JacnRob729 Posted:

thank you card help

i want to put a little saying in our thank yous. I found what that is really cute, and even though grammar is my thing, i am not sure if there should be a comma after wishes....what do you think


Should it be #1

A loving note can barely say
all we felt that magic day.
A heartfelt thanks is sent to you
for your thoughtful gift and wishes. too.


Or #2

A loving note can barely say
all we felt that magic day.
A heartfelt thanks is sent to you
for your thoughtful gift and wishes too.
lilpie19 Posted:

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I don't think you should put a comma...but I'm not an English major. JMO
JBKempf Posted:

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Posted by lilpie19

I don't think you should put a comma...but I'm not an English major. JMO



I don't think it belongs there either...then again I agree with Lilpie I'm a math person definitely not english!
Summer05 Posted:

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no comma

kam0813 Posted:

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No comma, and I am a nerdy English person...tee-hee

trish71407 Posted:

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def no comma

lindz Posted:

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no comma. It should flow without pauses. IMO But should it be 'Magical day' ?

serendipity0680 Posted:

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#2

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