Both parents are hosting (not splitting) the cost, and I would like to have both parents names on the invites.
I also want to say something about the mass celebrating the marriage...not just the marriage of...
Does this sound too verbose? I was told it is the formal way to do it but it sounds so wordy. Any suggestions?
Mr. & Mrs. Bride's Parents request the honour of your presence at the Nuptial Mass at which their daughter
Bride
and
Groom
son of Mr. & Mrs. Groom's Parents will be united in the Sacrament of Matrimony on Saturday, the twenty-third of September Two Thousand and six at half after ten o’clock in the morning