What do u think of these Save the date magnets (wording)
june262004
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What do u think of these Save the date magnets (wording)
I have magnet paper and will probably tying a ribbon on the top Wording says:
Times are busy and calendars are full Kristin and Michael Want you to know they are planning their wedding for June 26, 2004 on Long Island NY Formal invitations to follow
What do u think? should it be On long island or in long island? reception is at the swan club, should we put 'in Roslyn NY'????
2003OCT10
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DId you pick your caterer yet? Maybe putting the name of it there would sound better. JMO though... if you do Write ON LONG ISLAND... I like it though.
franksbride
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I think the wording is fine...
kelly6273
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I think the wording you have is great, but I don't think it's necessary to put 'NY'. JMO.
jags77
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i like 'Long Island, NY'
i've met some people who thought LI is in NJ!!!
june262004
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LI in NJ??? thats funny and silly
jannshari
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You can just take the 'on' out and just say
June 26, 2004 Long Island, NY
or Roslyn, NY
HearzBellz
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I think On Long Island is more grammatically correct.
I would not put the location (reception hall) that info will be on the invitation.
I might add a line saying 'mark your calendars.' or something like that, so your guests know what it is. JMO
june262004
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melani, like this? Times are busy and calendars are full Kristin and Michael Want you to know they are planning their wedding for June 26, 2004 on Long Island NY Please mark your calendars. Formal invitations to follow
bethsiar
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This may be picky, but there is just something about ON Long Island NY that stands out to me. maybe In? I don't know. I know people don't always know where Long Island is, but if they know you well enough to go to your wedding, I would hope they know you're in NY. I would maybe put Roslyn, Long Island and take out the ON completely. I hope that didn't confuse you more!
Sage10.03
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I don't think it should say ON either.....
I think it should just be:
June 26th, 2004 Long Island, NY
JMO....
june262004
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Times are busy and calendars are full Kristin and Michael Want you to know they are planning their wedding for June 26, 2004 Long Island NY Please mark your calendars. Formal invitations to follow
Like this?
NYCMeghan
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I think it looks great.
My only nit pick is that I would put Calendar in the singular on the second mention (since you are referring to each indivdual guests calendar)
and I'd add a comma after Long Island and a period after 'to follow' and lowercase 'want'
There is something about the first line that doesn't flow with me....how about adding 'since'?
Since times are busy and calendars are full Kristin and Michael want you to know they are planning their wedding for June 26, 2004 Long Island, NY Please mark your calendar. Formal invitations to follow.
