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What do we think of this wording???

laborday06 Posted:

What do we think of this wording???

Not sure I like it. It's what I want to say, but I think it's so boring!!!!

any ideas? I'm doing a pocketfold invite

The honour of your presence is requested at the marriage of
Kathleen Ann Smith
daughter of Mr. and Mrs. John Smith
and
Nicholas Joseph Smith
Son of Mr. and Mrs. Paul Emile Smith
on Sunday, the third of September
Two thousand and six
at six o'clock in the evening
Giorgio’s at Fox Hill

Adult Reception to Follow
Aly0124 Posted:

Re: What do we think of this wording???

I think it's a very traditional wording. If that is what you are looking for, then go with it. I am doing something almost identical except that the invitation will state that my parents request the honour of the guests' presence. They are hosting so they should be the ones making the requests.

Who is hosting your wedding?
laborday06 Posted:

Re: What do we think of this wording???


Posted by Aly0124

Who is hosting your wedding?



We are, but the parents insist on being on the invite.
Sunrise813 Posted:

Re: What do we think of this wording???


Posted by laborday06

Not sure I like it. It's what I want to say, but I think it's so boring!!!!

any ideas? I'm doing a pocketfold invite

The honour of your presence is requested at the marriage of
Kathleen Ann Smith
daughter of Mr. and Mrs. John Smith
and
Nicholas Joseph Smith
Son of Mr. and Mrs. Paul Emile Smith
on Sunday, the third of September
Two thousand and six
at six o'clock in the evening
Giorgio’s at Fox Hill

Adult Reception to Follow




This is how we are wording it, we are paying for it but really want our parents names on since even though they are not paying for it, they did raise us so we would like to honor them.



Kathleen Ann Smith
daughter of Mr. and Mrs. John Smith
and
Nicholas Joseph Smith
Son of Mr. and Mrs. Paul Emile SmithThe Request the honour of your presence ........

on Sunday, the third of September
Two thousand and six
at six o'clock in the evening
Giorgio’s at Fox Hill
Aly0124 Posted:

Re: What do we think of this wording???

Kathleen Ann Smith
daughter of Mr. and Mrs. John Smith
and
Nicholas Joseph Smith
Son of Mr. and Mrs. Paul Emile SmithThe Request the honour of your presence ........

on Sunday, the third of September
Two thousand and six
at six o'clock in the evening
Giorgio’s at Fox Hill


I like this. It honors your parents, but also shows that you are hosting. Very nice!

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