Mr. and Mrs. Christoher XXXX request the honour of your presence at the marriage and celebration of their daughter Kristi Elizabeth to Paul XXXX son of Walter XXXX on Saturday, the twelfth of July at twelve o'clock in the afternoon The Mansion at Timber Point 398 Great River Road Great River, New York
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Mr. and Mrs. Christoher XXXX request the honour of your presence at the marriage of their daughter Kristi Elizabeth to Paul XXXX son of Mr. Walter XXXX on Saturday, the twelfth of July at twelve o'clock in the afternoon The Mansion at Timber Point 398 Great River Road Great River, New York
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JoesFutureWife
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perfect!
madseason
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I like it! Perfect!
kristi313
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should i put Mr. in front of FH's fathers name seeing as my parents say mr & mrs?
bemyyoko
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I like it.
I might change it to just request the honour of your presence at the marriage of their daughter .....
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bemyyoko
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should i put Mr. in front of FH's fathers name seeing as my parents say mr & mrs?
I don't think you have to, but I'm no expert
kristi313
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should i put Mr. in front of FH's fathers name seeing as my parents say mr & mrs?
I don't think you have to, but I'm no expert
i'm just wondering if it looks bad that my parents are formal and his dad is just walter lol i'm not looking to offend ya know?
bemyyoko
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should i put Mr. in front of FH's fathers name seeing as my parents say mr & mrs?
I don't think you have to, but I'm no expert
i'm just wondering if it looks bad that my parents are formal and his dad is just walter lol i'm not looking to offend ya know?
yea I know what you mean... I think it sounds a little funny with the Mr. but it might be the proper way to word it when I think about it...
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I think 'the marriage and celebration of our daughter' sounds like it's a celebration of you...and marriage. Does that make sense? Could you do 'the marriage celebration of our daughter' or something? Or 'to celebrate the marriage of our daughter'? What do I know, though....my mom won't agree to any wording we like!
ChristineAaron08
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yeah- just put mr ..like u said..you dont want to offend
but it sounds good
i wouldnt have notice the lack of mr if you didnt mention it though
kristi313
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cool beans
now should i put 12:00 or earlier?? the ceremony begins at 12
alissa5517
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Posted by kristi313
should i put Mr. in front of FH's fathers name seeing as my parents say mr & mrs?
I would put Mr. with his fathers name. I think it will flow better.
lwny427
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we used the same wording as the 2nd one.
LauraD419
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should i put Mr. in front of FH's fathers name seeing as my parents say mr & mrs?
I don't think you have to, but I'm no expert
i'm just wondering if it looks bad that my parents are formal and his dad is just walter lol i'm not looking to offend ya know?
I agree..you should definitely add the mr.
BlakeG
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We just did our wording and did the same as your second one. The woman who did the invitations told us to put Mr. in front of his dad's name, but I don't know if there is a right or wrong answer. I think Mr makes it more formal and consistent.
