What do you think

MrsGarcia Posted: May 18, 2009 01:36 PM

What do you think

Its my own mock-up.. I'd add crystals to it and do other snazzy things..lol

I am just having such a hard time with this invite thing .. I can't find anything.. And when I do they are crazyyyyyy $$$$$

(Don't mind that its blurry... I had to resize it to much on adobe)

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Amberrenee6705 Posted: May 18, 2009 01:38 PM

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I think they look wonderful!! Great Job...I love DIY

springsandra Posted: May 18, 2009 02:34 PM

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Does it say 'Thirthieth'? Just make sure you proof it well. I also would suggest against the ellipses (...) after the first line.

Maybe tinker with the fonts a little, but I love the general idea! It's beautiful and you should be very proud of it!!

MrsGRod09 Posted: May 18, 2009 02:39 PM

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It's very beautiful!! Are you going to order the pocketfolds?

MrsGarcia Posted: May 18, 2009 05:29 PM

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Posted by GRod2Be

It's very beautiful!! Are you going to order the pocketfolds?

I was thinking about making them myself... Then adding touches of that other invite i posted a million times to the pocket fold.

Thats if I get the courage to actually make them...lol

kgicrls Posted: May 18, 2009 05:52 PM

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I love it... especially the saying

kbond06 Posted: May 18, 2009 06:31 PM

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love it! nice work

coldasice217 Posted: May 18, 2009 06:43 PM

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Great job! I agree to play around with the block font a bit, so it's a tad more legible, but other than that it's great!

ANT-N-BON-09 Posted: May 18, 2009 07:10 PM

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You did a great job!

MrsGRod09 Posted: May 18, 2009 08:31 PM

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Posted by MrsGarcia

Posted by GRod2Be

It's very beautiful!! Are you going to order the pocketfolds?

I was thinking about making them myself... Then adding touches of that other invite i posted a million times to the pocket fold.

Thats if I get the courage to actually make them...lol

Oh i meant are you ordering the folder itself from cardsandpockets.com and then pasting the invite you print out onto the folder? Your colors are pink and black right? I pretty metallic black fold would look hot!!!

scottslove Posted: May 18, 2009 08:42 PM

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Hi. I love your invitation but I think the wording is a little scrambled. You use OUR and WE in the beginning but then say 'request the honor of your presence at THEIR marriage'. I think if you are going to speak in the first person you should keep it throughout. Hope this helps.