What do you think about this wording???

We're about to print up our rehearsal dinner invitations. We've been playing around with the wording, what do you think?


Jammie popped the question
and Andrea said 'YES'
All the planning is over
from the hall to the dress
Only one thing remains
for this day to be Great
'Practice Makes Perfect'
April 13th is the date
We'll practice the ceremony,
and iron out the kinks
then it's off to JM's Steakhouse
for some dinner and some drinks!


Please join the Bride and Groom
to be
at 6:30 pm
Chateau Briand
Carle Place, New York

Your signifiant other is welcome to join us for dinner.

anyone??? We want to print them tomorrow morning to get them out by Monday Morning
TIA
~Andrea

I think you can leave out the 'some' before drinks in the last line. It flows better!

Enjoy JM's Steakhouse. That's right down the block from me.

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Posted by krispyc

I think you can leave out the 'some' before drinks in the last line. It flows better!

Enjoy JM's Steakhouse. That's right down the block from me.

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Thanks, Joseph the owner is letting us use the entire restaurant

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Posted by jada2destiny

We're about to print up our rehearsal dinner invitations. We've been playing around with the wording, what do you think?


Jammie popped the question
and Andrea said 'YES'
All the planning is over
from the hall to the dress
Only one thing remains
for this day to be Great
'Practice Makes Perfect'
April 13th is the date
We'll practice the ceremony,
and iron out the kinks
then it's off to JM's Steakhouse
for some dinner and some drinks!


Please join the Bride and Groom
to be
at 6:30 pm
Chateau Briand
Carle Place, New York

Your signifiant other is welcome to join us for dinner.

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I don't know if it matters but you forgot the 'c' in significant. I just don't want you to send it to the printers with a typo.

I feel its a little too wordy (JMO).

I'm not too crazy about the first line 'Jammie popped the question and Andrea said 'YES'. '

I feel the guests already know this (I would have probably used those words on the save the date cards). JMO.