What do you think of my vows?

Original post by nferrandi

Sep 30, 2004 09:03 PM

My FH and I are writing our own vows and we set some ground rules: 5 sentences and end it with 'this is my solemn vow.' I've been working on mine and would love some honest feedback. Please tell me if there's anything you think I could do to improve them.

Steve, it’s taken us a long time to get here, but that time has been filled with growth, both individually and as a couple. Throughout all of the ups and downs, I have never doubted that we would be standing here today. I promise, in front of our family and friends, to care for you and support you through whatever life throws our way. I promise to be faithful to you and to never let you doubt my love for you, or the eternal strength of that love. This is my solemn vow.

jfabbride Posted: Oct 01, 2004 03:49 PM

Re: What do you think of my vows?

IMO, I like the original one the best so far...it gave me chills. I love the part about the strength of eternal love!!!

Great Job!!!!!!!!!!

nferrandi Posted: Oct 01, 2004 03:50 PM

Re: What do you think of my vows?

No, we're having an interfaith ceremony at our hall. I would guess that the church probably wouldn't let you write you won vows, but I could be wrong.

eogara Posted: Oct 01, 2004 03:55 PM

Re: What do you think of my vows?

Posted by nferrandi

Posted by nferrandi
Steve, it's taken us a long time to get here, but that time has been filled with growth, both individually and as a couple. Throughout all of the ups and downs, I have never doubted that we would be standing right where we are. Today we take two lives and turn them into one. I promise, in front of our friends and family, to care of you and support you through whatever comes our way. I promise to be faithful to you and always show you the respect you deserve. I promise to always make you feel special and secure in my never ending love you for you. This is my solemn vow.

Last time:
Steve, it's taken us a long time to get here, but that time has been filled with growth, both individually and as a couple. Throughout all of the ups and downs, I never doubted that we would be standing here, taking our two lives and joining them into one. I promise, in front of our family and friends, to take care of you and support you through whatever comes our way. I promise to always make you feel special and secure in my never ending love for you. This is my solemn vow.

Perfecto!