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what do you think of this wording???

jax2718 Posted:

what do you think of this wording???

We have experienced love...
in our parents, families and friends
and now a new love in each other
Together with our parents, we
Jaclyn Eileen
and
Gracjan
invite you to share with us
a celebration of love as we
exchange our marriage vows
at 3 o'clock in the after noon
on Friday, April 28
2006
St.Isidore's Church
622 Pulaski Street
Riverhead,NY 11901
MrsStefan Posted:

Re: what do you think of this wording???

I like the first part, but I dont think you have to say 'the ceremon will be held'. You can just end it with 'as we excange our marriage vows'. You can just leave a space and then write the ceremony info

jax2718 Posted:

Re: what do you think of this wording???

thanks for the info I meant to edit that out!
JCam695 Posted:

Re: what do you think of this wording???

JMO, my only thought is to put your names first and then together with their parents.

traditionally you should say their not our
maria5-6-05 Posted:

Re: what do you think of this wording???

I really like it. It's different and sweet! I agree with JCAM695 about putting your names 1st.

beatle06 Posted:

Re: what do you think of this wording???

I would say we have experienced love

FROM our parents, family and friends

not IN

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