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Which invitation wording do you like?

jessamyn78 Posted:

Which invitation wording do you like?

Together with their families (or with their parents)

Jessamyn Marci Ramos
and
Vincent Anthony DePaola

Invite you to join
In the celebration of their marriage
Friday, the eleventh of July
Two Thousand and Eight
At Three O'Clock in the Afternoon

Christ the King Church
2 Indian Head Road
Commack, NY

OR

Because you have shared in our lives
with your friendship and love, we

Jessamyn Marci Ramos
and
Vincent Anthony DePaola

together with our families
invite you to share in our joy
as we become husband and wife

Friday, the eleventh of July
Two Thousand and Eight
Three O'Clock in the Afternoon

Christ the King Church
2 Indian Head Road
Commack, NY
madseason Posted:

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#2!!!

bluekat16 Posted:

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I like wording #2

Munchkn16 Posted:

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#2 absolutely

Tigerlilie10308 Posted:

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i really like number 2

jessamyn78 Posted:

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I like #2 also, but my mother disagrees. She sent is really adamant about the invite being more formal.

bella1028 Posted:

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I prefer number one and I also think I like together with their parents better, unless you have specific circumstances that would involve other relatives...and also something I was told when making mine was that you should not include the word 'and' in the year...just put two thousand eight...I had no clue
jessamyn78 Posted:

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Posted by bella1028

I prefer number one and I also think I like together with their parents better, unless you have specific circumstances that would involve other relatives...and also something I was told when making mine was that you should not include the word 'and' in the year...just put two thousand eight...I had no clue



I had no clue about that either. Thanks!
jessamyn78 Posted:

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I would love some more opinions girls. TIA

Princess Cut Bride Posted:

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I like #2 better but I don't like that it starts off with the word 'Because'. I would take that off. JMO

bella1028 Posted:

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Posted by jessamyn78

I would love some more opinions girls. TIA




no problem
jessamyn78 Posted:

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bump with another question-

how can i mix the two wordings together?
mao0426 Posted:

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I like #1 better, we used something like that. I like the more formal wording

awgg822 Posted:

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#2 is just too much wording for me. Gramatically (sorry, I was an English major!), #1 flows so much nicer and is more formal.

trinisweetness Posted:

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#2

lonal Posted:

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Love number 2.

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