I am doing my inserts to send out with my std's. I will be making them the same size as the magnet but using cardstock and the print will be the same color as the print on the std.
For your comfort and convenience A block of hotel rooms have been held at a discounted rate There will be shuttles to bring you to and from the reception We will also be having an after party in the hotel bar for all guests satying here
The Wingate Inn 821 Stewart Ave. Garden City, NY 11530
Please reserve your room before June 11, 2008 Rate per night: $149 516-705-9000 Group Code: last name/last name wedding
AmandaLynn04
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'staying' is spelled wrong
JTsGal829
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'staying' is spelled wrong
yea that's all i found too... but i'm reading again cause i'm bad at this stuff..lol
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I am doing my inserts to send out with my std's. I will be making them the same size as the magnet but using cardstock and the print will be the same color as the print on the std.
For your comfort and convenience A block of hotel rooms have been held at a discounted rate There will be shuttles to bring you to and from the reception We will also be having an after party in the hotel bar for all guests satying here
The Wingate Inn 821 Stewart Ave. Garden City, NY 11530
Please reserve your room before June 11, 2008 Rate per night: $149 516-705-9000 Group Code: last name/last name wedding
Staying is spelled wrong. There are some punctuation issues - do you want those too? I used to be a proofreader...
jteach711
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thanks, thats just me not knowing how to type
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I am doing my inserts to send out with my std's. I will be making them the same size as the magnet but using cardstock and the print will be the same color as the print on the std.
For your comfort and convenience A block of hotel rooms have been held at a discounted rate There will be shuttles to bring you to and from the reception We will also be having an after party in the hotel bar for all guests satying here
The Wingate Inn 821 Stewart Ave. Garden City, NY 11530
Please reserve your room before June 11, 2008 Rate per night: $149 516-705-9000 Group Code: last name/last name wedding
Staying is spelled wrong. There are some punctuation issues - do you want those too? I used to be a proofreader...
Yes tell me where you think I should have punctuation please
Princess Cut Bride
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Looks good Jess...just fix 'staying'.
ant n tilde
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staying is spelled wrong other than that - its groovy!
davenjess
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I am doing my inserts to send out with my std's. I will be making them the same size as the magnet but using cardstock and the print will be the same color as the print on the std.
For your comfort and convenience A block of hotel rooms have been held at a discounted rate There will be shuttles to bring you to and from the reception We will also be having an after party in the hotel bar for all guests satying here
The Wingate Inn 821 Stewart Ave. Garden City, NY 11530
Please reserve your room before June 11, 2008 Rate per night: $149 516-705-9000 Group Code: last name/last name wedding
If you want to be proper: after convenience - COMMA & lower case the A with A block PERIOD after reception. I would change - we will also be having to, There will be an after party. PERIOD after here (staying here). Change staying HERE to staying there. PERIOD after 2008. COMMA after Ave - Stewart Ave,
Also - if shuttles are free - maybe say that too..
JUST MY OPINIONS:::
For your comfort and convenience, a block of hotel rooms have been held at a discounted rate. There will be complimentary shuttles to bring you to and from the reception. There will be an after party in the hotel bar for all guests staying there.
The Wingate Inn 821 Stewart Ave., Garden City, NY 11530
Please reserve your room before June 11, 2008. Rate per night: $149 516-705-9000 Group Code: last name/last name wedding
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Posted by davenjess
Posted by jteach711
I am doing my inserts to send out with my std's. I will be making them the same size as the magnet but using cardstock and the print will be the same color as the print on the std.
For your comfort and convenience A block of hotel rooms have been held at a discounted rate There will be shuttles to bring you to and from the reception We will also be having an after party in the hotel bar for all guests satying here
The Wingate Inn 821 Stewart Ave. Garden City, NY 11530
Please reserve your room before June 11, 2008 Rate per night: $149 516-705-9000 Group Code: last name/last name wedding
If you want to be proper: after convenience - COMMA & lower case the A with A block PERIOD after reception. I would change - we will also be having to, There will be an after party. PERIOD after here (staying here). Change staying HERE to staying there. PERIOD after 2008. COMMA after Ave - Stewart Ave,
JUST MY OPINIONS:::
For your comfort and convenience, a block of hotel rooms have been held at a discounted rate. There will be shuttles to bring you to and from the reception. There will be an after party in the hotel bar for all guests staying there.
The Wingate Inn 821 Stewart Ave., Garden City, NY 11530
Please reserve your room before June 11, 2008. Rate per night: $149 516-705-9000 Group Code: last name/last name wedding
GRACIAS
davenjess
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I am doing my inserts to send out with my std's. I will be making them the same size as the magnet but using cardstock and the print will be the same color as the print on the std.
For your comfort and convenience A block of hotel rooms have been held at a discounted rate There will be shuttles to bring you to and from the reception We will also be having an after party in the hotel bar for all guests satying here
The Wingate Inn 821 Stewart Ave. Garden City, NY 11530
Please reserve your room before June 11, 2008 Rate per night: $149 516-705-9000 Group Code: last name/last name wedding
If you want to be proper: after convenience - COMMA & lower case the A with A block PERIOD after reception. I would change - we will also be having to, There will be an after party. PERIOD after here (staying here). Change staying HERE to staying there. PERIOD after 2008. COMMA after Ave - Stewart Ave,
JUST MY OPINIONS:::
For your comfort and convenience, a block of hotel rooms have been held at a discounted rate. There will be shuttles to bring you to and from the reception. There will be an after party in the hotel bar for all guests staying there.
The Wingate Inn 821 Stewart Ave., Garden City, NY 11530
Please reserve your room before June 11, 2008. Rate per night: $149 516-705-9000 Group Code: last name/last name wedding
GRACIAS
Very welcome - i also edited to add a complimentary word - if the shuttles are free...
