We are having an after party following my reception. We are trying to make invitations for it and I am just not creative enough. This is what we have so far:
Let’s not let the party end. Vinnie & Suzanne coridially invite you to join us for cocktails and dancing at The Lizard Lounge City, NY
On July 26th from 7 to 11pm
Please help!!! Any ideas will be greatly appreciated!
swags1016
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bump
Olgaki
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You thought 1 party was enough?
Come to the AFTERPARTY and we'll keep it going all night!!
XX and XX invite you to kick back and party at the Lizard Lounge ....
Or something like that? Maybe?
sophie78
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You can't refer to yourself in the third person (Vinnie and Suzanne) and then say 'us.' Get rid of 'to join us.'
swags1016
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Vinnie and Suzanne are my mom and stepdad
allure
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I like the way you worded it already Sounds like a great wedding
