wording help with poll!

ILOVEBRIAN2008 Posted: Feb 15, 2008 09:09 PM

wording help with poll!

people are telling me different things lol so i figure i need a poll haha which one sounds better? (keep in mind that both parents are helping pay some and fh and i are paying the largest sum, but i dont want to exclude the parents names) TIA!

Option 1

TOGETHER WITH THEIR PARENTS

MR. AND MRS. JOHN
AND
MR. AND MRS. JOSEPH

Jenise
&
Brian

REQUEST THE HONOUR OF YOUR PRESENCE
AS THEY EXCHANGE MARRIAGE VOWS AND
BEGIN THEIR NEW LIFE TOGETHER

FRIDAY, THE EIGHTH OF AUGUST
TWO THOUSAND AND EIGHT
THREE O’CLOCK IN THE AFTERNOON

SAINT FRANCIS DE CHANTAL
ROMAN CATHOLIC CHURCH
1309 WANTAGH AVE
WANTAGH, NY 11793

OR

Option 2:

Jenise
&
Brian

TOGETHER WITH THEIR PARENTS

MR. AND MRS. JOHN
AND
MR. AND MRS. JOSEPH

REQUEST THE HONOUR OF YOUR PRESENCE
AS THEY EXCHANGE MARRIAGE VOWS AND
BEGIN THEIR NEW LIFE TOGETHER

FRIDAY, THE EIGHTH OF AUGUST
TWO THOUSAND AND EIGHT
THREE O’CLOCK IN THE AFTERNOON

SAINT FRANCIS DE CHANTAL
ROMAN CATHOLIC CHURCH
1309 WANTAGH AVE
WANTAGH, NY 11793

madseason Posted: Feb 15, 2008 09:11 PM

Re: wording help with poll!

def #2! IMO your names should be first....when i read both of them, the second one had the attention focused on your names....while on the first one i was already reading the 3 names and your names didnt just pop to me...u kow?

alissa5517 Posted: Feb 15, 2008 09:22 PM

Re: wording help with poll!

I like #2. I think your names should be first.

donegal419 Posted: Feb 15, 2008 09:25 PM

Re: wording help with poll!

definitely #1.... the parents names go first. your names this way will be centered in the middle of the invitation and can be enlarged.

bella1028 Posted: Feb 15, 2008 09:34 PM

Re: wording help with poll!

Jenise, It is so funny, I posted pretty much the exact same question earlier today....I am confused as well...Both sets of parents are helping, but I think in the end we are just going to put our names and then together with their parents(parents names not included)I saw your choices and I think I like together with parents but, I would put you and FH names first...who would have thought invites would be this confusing????

ILOVEBRIAN2008 Posted: Feb 15, 2008 09:43 PM

Re: wording help with poll!

Posted by bella1028

Jenise, It is so funny, I posted pretty much the exact same question earlier today....I am confused as well...Both sets of parents are helping, but I think in the end we are just going to put our names and then together with their parents(parents names not included)I saw your choices and I think I like together with parents but, I would put you and FH names first...who would have thought invites would be this confusing????

omg i know u should see me here playing with my invite 10000000 times whether its spacing, wording or font LOL fh is like they all look the same haha...oh the things we obsess over haha