wording opinion

hellllllooo all!
i've been gone too long!
so sad.

I'd love for some input on this wording that we're thinking about putting on the side of your Jones soda bottles.
I can't decide if its cute or too kiddie-ish.
much appreciated :)

We’d like to take the time to say
Thanks for sharing in our day.
With so much excitement, you could burst
So here’s a treat to quench your thirst.
And if you happened to snap a few
Please don’t mind sharing, if you do,
Drop them all in this special space
So we have new pictures to fill our place.

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