Would you be my Bridesmaid

To ask each girl to be my bridesmaid, I'm making gift packages, and each box will have a card, blue shredded paper (you know that stuff... that you put in gift bags?) and one of their favorite things (i.e- one girl, a whole bunch of Cow-print stuff b/c she is loves cows, and my FSIL, Chocolate, b/c she is a chocoholic).

Anyway, i also wanted to include a cute poem to ask them... what do you think of this?

Something Old
Something New
Something Borrowed
Somthing YOU!
Will you be my bridesmaid?

Is it too cutsey/corny?

thanks girls