x-post from BHB - need helps asking my FSIL's to be in my BP

Im a Pepper Posted: Apr 06, 2008 03:52 PM

x-post from BHB - need helps asking my FSIL's to be in my BP

OK girls, I need your help. Since I live in PA in my FSIL's live on Long Island, I decided I'm going to mail these really cute, 'Will you be my bridesmaid?' cards I found. But I need something great to write inside! Here's the thing, we're not extremely close. In fact, they're much older than me and I'm not even sure if they have time or money to be in the party but it's very important to me that I at least ask, since they're going to be family So what can I write in their cards? Are there any poems that would be good for a situation like this?
TIA!

Just Cindy Posted: Apr 06, 2008 03:56 PM

Re: x-post from BHB - need helps asking my FSIL's to be in my BP

THis is short, sweet and simple.

The day that I marry, our families will blend,
you'll be my sister and also my friend.

It's just the beginning, of our brand new life,
as your brother and I, become man and wife.

So I would like to know if you will be,
a part of this day, a bridesmaid for me.

Good luck

Im a Pepper Posted: Apr 06, 2008 04:02 PM

Re: x-post from BHB - need helps asking my FSIL's to be in my BP

Posted by cszlaien

THis is short, sweet and simple.

The day that I marry, our families will blend,
you'll be my sister and also my friend.

It's just the beginning, of our brand new life,
as your brother and I, become man and wife.

So I would like to know if you will be,
a part of this day, a bridesmaid for me.

Good luck

OMG!!! that is SOOOOOO perfect! thank you so much! i'm so excited to use that!

also, one of the FSIL's is actually married to FH's brother (so she's FH's SIL). What do you suggest that I change the 'as your brother and I' part to for her card?

FutureMrsLV Posted: Apr 06, 2008 04:05 PM

Re: x-post from BHB - need helps asking my FSIL's to be in my BP

ohyay thats a cute poem! im glad your asking them to be part of the party!

Just Cindy Posted: Apr 06, 2008 04:10 PM

Re: x-post from BHB - need helps asking my FSIL's to be in my BP

Maybe you can put his name instead?

Im a Pepper Posted: Apr 06, 2008 04:12 PM

Re: x-post from BHB - need helps asking my FSIL's to be in my BP

Posted by cszlaien

Maybe you can put his name instead?

actually that sounds really natural like it was meant to be there!

thanks again. i was a little worried about this but i think it's going to turn out great!