xpost - please proof my invite

Together with their families

Janet Ann xxx
and
Joseph Paul xxx

request the honor of your presence
as they begin their new life together and exchange vows
on Saturday, the twenty-ninth of November
Two thousand and eight
at three o'clock in the afternoon
Church of St. Joseph
39 North Carll Avenue
Babylon, NY 11702

Reception to follow

Here is a pic (its kind of blurry). We are going to mount it on slightly larger pearl or champagne colored cardstock.
(a semi- DIY!!)

everything looks good to me....I dont think we had the 'at' three o'clock on our invitations I think it just said the time but I dont know if it matters

and as a forewarning-you are going to get differing opinions on the year

two thousand eight
VS
two thousand and eight