invitation wording

I'm getting ready to send my wording over to my invitation people.

any spelling mistakes, things you would change...anything miss manners would cringe at?

When should my RSVP date be?


“YOU ARE SIMPLY MY BEST TIME. YOU ARE MY SWEETEST LAUGHTER.
ALWAYS YOU WILL HAVE MY HAND TO HOLD. ALWAYS.'

THE HONOR OF YOUR PRESENCE IS REQUESTED AS
Laura Ellen xxx
DAUGHTER OF MR. AND MRS. MICHAEL J. xxx
TAKES THE HAND OF
Mr. Richard John xxx
SON OF MR. AND MRS. DANIEL T. xxxx
IN HOLY MATRIMONY
SATURDAY, THE SEVENTH OF MAY
TWO THOUSAND AND FIVE
AT FIVE IN THE EVENING
MARINERS MEMORIAL CHAPEL
UNITED STATES MERCHANT MARINE ACADEMY
KINGS POINT, NEW YORK

I think April 14. That gives them time to reach you - about a week so April 21.

Then you have 2 weeks to call those who won't send it back.

“YOU ARE SIMPLY MY BEST TIME. YOU ARE MY SWEETEST LAUGHTER.
ALWAYS YOU WILL HAVE MY HAND TO HOLD. ALWAYS.'

THE HONOR OF YOUR PRESENCE IS REQUESTED AS
Laura Ellen xxx
DAUGHTER OF MR. AND MRS. MICHAEL J. xxx
TAKES THE HAND OF
Mr. Richard John xxx
SON OF MR. AND MRS. DANIEL T. xxxx
IN HOLY MATRIMONY
SATURDAY, THE SEVENTH OF MAY
TWO THOUSAND AND FIVE
AT FIVE O'CLOCK IN THE EVENING
MARINERS MEMORIAL CHAPEL
UNITED STATES MERCHANT MARINE ACADEMY
KINGS POINT, NEW YORK



Just added 'o'clock'

looks great laura! i only did one thing different on mine, i put five o'clock in the afternoon since it is before sunset. i'm not sure which way is right, yours might be, but i think its also personal preference, hence i say it looks great!

(phew! was that a run on!!)

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Posted by bluesashbride

looks great laura! i only did one thing different on mine, i put five o'clock in the afternoon since it is before sunset. i'm not sure which way is right, yours might be, but i think its also personal preference, hence i say it looks great!

(phew! was that a run on!!)

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Your way is correct. FH skeeps telling me its wrong, evening is only after sunset or something.

I just liked the way evening sounded better

I love the wording Laura! I can't wait to see it. If you have any left over, I would love a souvenir invite!
I like evening better too! Go for it!

I can't wait until the first review of our wedding hall!