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help with my review?

SFAR89 Posted:

help with my review?

I just have a question, I feel like it's too lengthy. I am terrible at writing just a simple sentence. I feel like I have so much that I want to say lol Any advice on how to keep it short while still getting in what I want to say?

RisiLeigh Posted:

Re: help with my review?

LOL can't offer you much help! My review was like 8 pages in Word and that was before I added the links to the pictures

None of us brides seem to mind long reviews, so I wouldn't really worry about it!
Toucan311 Posted:

Re: help with my review?

I always tell my students to read their essays over and take out ALL of the information that isn't 100% necessary to get the point of a piece. I think this would go for a review as well! Short and to the point is usually best. And pictures speak a thousand words.

SFAR89 Posted:

Re: help with my review?

That is true, but I need to tell everyone how terrible my Mother in law is lol

That's like a page in itself :-X

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