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is this gramatically correct?

mickeya1a Posted:

is this gramatically correct?

'For your convenience, a block of rooms has been reserved for the guests'

NIHA Posted:

Re: is this gramatically correct?

It sounds fine to me, but how about:

For our guests' (don't know where the apostrophe goes) convenience, a block of rooms has been reserved
Cira Posted:

Re: is this gramatically correct?

Hey Amy,

I made up cards for our guests and they said:

For your convenience, rooms have been reserved,
at a discounted rate, at the:


Floral Park Motor Lodge
Address
City, State Zip
phone #

www.floralparkmotorlodge.com


To take advantage of the discount rate,
please specify that you are reserving for:
(my maiden name) / (his last name) Wedding

Directions are on the reverse side


Claud2001 Posted:

Re: is this gramatically correct?

The problem with the grammar is that you refer to the same people in the first and third person(s) within the same sentence.

I think either suggestion that Nina and Cira offered will work fine. Good luck!
Jenn P Posted:

Re: is this gramatically correct?

Claud is right. Either suggestion is fine; I would just remove all the commas from the second.

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