Another poem....

We are giving champagne flutes as our favor. They are engraved with forget me not flowers. I thought this would be more 'usable' than a glass with our names and date engraved.

Anyway. I wanted to put a little note with them, and this is what I have come up with so far.


'We hope life brings you
many days to fill these up (or pop the cork)
and celebrate!

And when you do,
we hope you'll see
these little flowers
that say
'Remember Me'

And maybe you'll laugh
and reminisce over
this special day
in early October'



What should I add? Change? Any thoughts?

Thanks....