anyone up for proofing our invite

snowcutie82 Posted: Jun 10, 2008 03:10 PM

anyone up for proofing our invite

the coloring is a bit off (so ignore that). i took off our names etc. and we are replacing nuptial mass with wedding mass.

i already noticed that the 'T' in Thousand should be lower case

question - is the 'S' in sacrament supposed to be capitalized?

any other errors or anything? Thanks!

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bluekat16 Posted: Jun 10, 2008 03:22 PM

Re: anyone up for proofing our invite

It looks good to me. I think sacrament is fine the way you have it. I'm not catholic so I'm not sure if it should be capitalized.

I really like how you used 'beloved', I'm assuming your FH's father passed away?

Mici n KC Posted: Jun 10, 2008 03:23 PM

Re: anyone up for proofing our invite

It looks good to me. I don't know if it's your preference or not, but I would remove
two thousand and eight
and make it
two thousand eight

snowcutie82 Posted: Jun 10, 2008 03:34 PM

Re: anyone up for proofing our invite

Posted by Mici n KC

It looks good to me. I don't know if it's your preference or not, but I would remove
two thousand and eight
and make it
two thousand eight

oooh thanks i just say the post about the year...is there a right/wrong way or is it just preference???

im like sooo done with invite wording that i dont care anymore

snowcutie82 Posted: Jun 10, 2008 03:37 PM

Re: anyone up for proofing our invite

Posted by bluekat16

It looks good to me. I think sacrament is fine the way you have it. I'm not catholic so I'm not sure if it should be capitalized.

I really like how you used 'beloved', I'm assuming your FH's father passed away?

thanks! im catholic and i dont even know if it should or shouldn't be capitalized!

yes, fh's dad passed away a few yrs ago and his mom wanted to include him (as did we cuz he was awesome) but i didnt' want to use the word late. i haven't really seen it like that or know if its really 'proper' but we all liked how it sounds.