can someone please help me finish this poem?

To have more time to socialize
And visit with the bride-to-be
Wrap your gift in cellophane
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The invite I want to use for my sister's shower only fits 4 lines. I've seen the longer poem but have to shorten it...any ideas???

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Posted by ef922

To have more time to socialize
And visit with the bride-to-be
Wrap your gift in cellophane
________________________


The invite I want to use for my sister's shower only fits 4 lines. I've seen the longer poem but have to shorten it...any ideas???

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I would switch the lines around

Please wrap your gift in cellophane,
So we all can see.
We'll have more time to socialize,
with the bride to be!'

Edited bc i messed up a comma~!

I would switch the lines around

Please wrap your gift in cellophane,
So we all can see.
We'll have more time to socialize,
with the bride to be!'

THIS!

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Posted by leelou48

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Posted by ef922

To have more time to socialize
And visit with the bride-to-be
Wrap your gift in cellophane
________________________


The invite I want to use for my sister's shower only fits 4 lines. I've seen the longer poem but have to shorten it...any ideas???

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I would switch the lines around

Please wrap your gift in cellophane,
So we all can see.
We'll have more time to socialize,
with the bride to be!'

Edited bc i messed up a comma~!

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Thus. Or if you don't want to keep the lines in the order you have, I'd say, 'so we have more tome to socialize', I think it flows better. And your last line is the 'so we can all see'

JMO

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Posted by 1112bride



I would switch the lines around

Please wrap your gift in cellophane,
So we all can see.
We'll have more time to socialize,
with the bride to be!'

THIS!

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Yess.. I told my mom i dont want to put everyone sleep (i was bored at my good friend she torturedddd us .. She opened every single thing even the gift baskets

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I would switch the lines around

Please wrap your gift in cellophane,
So we all can see.
We'll have more time to socialize,
with the bride to be!'

Edited bc i messed up a comma~!

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THIS! Also, I love the idea!!! I just sent it to my MOH haha