Can someone proof read this...

I forgot to send the 'thank you' for the back of our program' TIA

We would like to thank all of you for coming from near and far to be here today to witness the beginning of our new life together. We appreciate the support and love you have all shown us through the years and words cannot express how grateful we are to have you in our lives. Our memories of today will be filled with joy because you have all shared in helping to make our wedding day truly wonderful.

We hope that you will have enjoyed this occasion as much as we have.

We have placed candles on the mantles in memory of those who are no longer with us. Please join us in keeping them in our thoughts and prayers.

John Fitzgerald, Grandfather of the bride
Leonard & Helen Woyicki, Grandparents of the groom
John & Anna Walters, Grandparents of the groom

i would just take out this part

We hope that you will have enjoyed this occasion as much as we have.

i think the tenses are a bit weird ... like i think that 'We hope that you will have enjoyed this occasion' should be 'We hope that you enjoy this occasion'.

Also 'Our memories of today will be filled with joy because you have all shared in helping to make our wedding day truly wonderful.' should be 'Our memories of today will be filled with joy because you have made our wedding day truly wonderful.' (but i'm not entirely sure bout this one)

otherwise, i like

HTH

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Posted by GR2010

I forgot to send the 'thank you' for the back of our program' TIA

We would like to thank all of you for coming from near and far to be here today to witness the beginning of our new life together. We appreciate the support and love you have all shown us through the years and words cannot express how grateful we are to have you in our lives. Our memories of today will be filled with joy because you have all shared in helping to make our wedding day truly wonderful.

We hope that you will have enjoyed this occasion as much as we have.

We have placed candles on the mantles in memory of those who are no longer with us. Please join us in keeping them in our thoughts and prayers.

John Fitzgerald, Grandfather of the bride
Leonard & Helen Woyicki, Grandparents of the groom
John & Anna Walters, Grandparents of the groom

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I like this a lot.

There should be a comma between years, and.

Anddd I think that last sentence should read 'We hope that you will enjoy this occasion as much as we have.'

I think the sentence that starts 'Our memories' would sound better as 'Our memories of today will be filled with joy because you all have helped to make our wedding day truly wonderful.'