Can you please proof my invitation wording for me?

Original post by MarcellaBella

Dec 09, 2002 03:55 PM

I've stared at it for soo long, I'm going to go bananas!

WE HAVE EXPERIENCED LOVE…
IN OUR PARENTS,
OUR FAMILIES AND FRIENDS
AND NOW A NEW LOVE IN EACH OTHER

TOGETHER WITH OUR PARENTS,
WE
Marcella
And
Michael Todd

INVITE YOU TO SHARE WITH US A CELEBRATION OF OUR LOVE
SATURDAY, THE NINTH OF AUGUST
TWO THOUSAND AND THREE
AT HALF PAST THREE
IN THE AFTERNOON

SAINT PATRICK’S OLD CATHEDRAL
263 MULBERRY STREET
NEW YORK CITY, NEW YORK

Feast and merriment will follow

MarcellaBella Posted: Dec 09, 2002 04:49 PM

Re: Can you please proof my invitation wording for me?

if I used 'Their' then the beginning wouldn't make sense no?

christine1221 Posted: Dec 09, 2002 04:53 PM

Re: Can you please proof my invitation wording for me?

now you've got it!

JustJodi Posted: Dec 09, 2002 04:57 PM

Re: Can you please proof my invitation wording for me?

well no...
It would make sence to say
'together with OUR parents ME and my fiance would like to invite you....'
and obvioulsy you arent going to say that..

Since you are using your names, a 3rd party is saying..
'together with THEIR parents, marcella and johndoe would like to invite you'

Ask a vendor before you do anything.
This is what I was told
;-/

JustJodi Posted: Dec 09, 2002 04:59 PM

Re: Can you please proof my invitation wording for me?

Also, there are LOTS of websites you can go look at that give you suggestions on your wording and they all use THEIR...
That is what made me 2nd guess myself when I was doing mine as well..