This day I will marry my best friend, the one I laugh with, live for, love Julie Xxxxx and Raymond Xxxxxx together with their parents hope that you will join in this celebration on Friday, the twenty-fourth of September Two thousand and four at six-thirty in the evening Huntington Townhouse 124 East Jericho Turnpike Huntington Station, New York
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Am I missing any comma's near 'together with their parents'? Do you think the last line is or is there something better to write?
bogiedmb41
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i dont think you missed any commas or punctuations and I think the last line is good short and sweet
palebride
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This day I will marry my best friend, the one I laugh with, live for, love.
Julie Xxxxx and Raymond Xxxxxx,
together with their parents hope that you will join in this celebration on Friday, the twenty-fourth of September Two thousand and four at six-thirty in the evening
Huntington Townhouse 124 East Jericho Turnpike Huntington Station, New York
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that's how i would do it - i added a period after the first two lines, a comma after his name and some spacing so your names stand out.
Nessa79
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its beautiful Julz sounds perfect
Stacey04
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Its sounds good.. We also did a small space above my name and below his, and actually the font is one size bigger than the rest. They look nice like that..
julz33
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Or names are going to be a little bigger and in a different font, but we can't really do the spaces because there isn't enough room!
jen110704
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I think the wording is prefect!
julz33
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So everyone else thinks it is OK? I am going to be ordering any day now... actually probably on Tuesday.
